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English Grammar and Style Revising medical writing Reasons not rules: Backtracking, pronoun-induced Part 2 – Single syntactic unit revision
Authors: Michael Lewis Schneir
This is the second of a series of three articles on pronouns that cause distraction by making the reader backtrack. In this article, we examine a technique for eliminating backtracking by making a single change to the construction of the sentence. The technique is to eliminate the pronoun that is causing the distraction by shortening the clause with the pronoun into a pronoun-free phrase.
Medical Writing. 2015;24(1):39–40

